Comments on: Start the Story: Where Do We Begin? [12.16.09] http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/start-the-story-where-do-we-begin-12-16-09/ Mon, 06 Sep 2010 14:10:42 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Gavin http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/start-the-story-where-do-we-begin-12-16-09/comment-page-1/#comment-1944 Gavin Sun, 03 Jan 2010 01:40:44 +0000 http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/?p=2555#comment-1944 Family photos, all smiles and good memories. These are the snap shots of our lives, clasping on to a particular moment, but really just promoting a desired result inconsistent with how our family lives really exist. Family photos, all smiles and good memories. These are the snap shots of our lives, clasping on to a particular moment, but really just promoting a desired result inconsistent with how our family lives really exist.

]]> By: Ali http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/start-the-story-where-do-we-begin-12-16-09/comment-page-1/#comment-1739 Ali Fri, 18 Dec 2009 19:34:03 +0000 http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/?p=2555#comment-1739 Mom wanted a family portrait, one where they all looked like a normal family, even though everyone knew they were anything but normal. But she forgot her ribbon, the one holding her head in place after the accident, so Bobby stepped up and held her head in just the perfect position for the photographer. Mom wanted a family portrait, one where they all looked like a normal family, even though everyone knew they were anything but normal. But she forgot her ribbon, the one holding her head in place after the accident, so Bobby stepped up and held her head in just the perfect position for the photographer.

]]> By: Laura http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/start-the-story-where-do-we-begin-12-16-09/comment-page-1/#comment-1728 Laura Thu, 17 Dec 2009 23:44:13 +0000 http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/?p=2555#comment-1728 It was already too late when they realized the terrible synergistic effect of polyester clothing and hairspray on human behavior. Dad was the only one spared, likely due to his thinning hair, although he prefers to believe it was a divine side effect of his penchant for wearing clerical collars on every shirt. It was already too late when they realized the terrible synergistic effect of polyester clothing and hairspray on human behavior. Dad was the only one spared, likely due to his thinning hair, although he prefers to believe it was a divine side effect of his penchant for wearing clerical collars on every shirt.

]]> By: DunCAN http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/start-the-story-where-do-we-begin-12-16-09/comment-page-1/#comment-1726 DunCAN Thu, 17 Dec 2009 22:34:42 +0000 http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/?p=2555#comment-1726 Susan was elated that finally she had all the family together for a special family portrait. Little did she know that by the end of the day, Steve, her loving husband of 20 years and parish priest, would be reading last rites to at least one member of the family and listening to a confression from his 15 year old step daughter, Debbie. Susan was elated that finally she had all the family together for a special family portrait. Little did she know that by the end of the day, Steve, her loving husband of 20 years and parish priest, would be reading last rites to at least one member of the family and listening to a confression from his 15 year old step daughter, Debbie.

]]> By: Shane http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/start-the-story-where-do-we-begin-12-16-09/comment-page-1/#comment-1720 Shane Thu, 17 Dec 2009 03:26:59 +0000 http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/?p=2555#comment-1720 version 2: Strangulation is always fun if done as a family. At least that’s what dad believed, mom hid, sis endured, and I'm cocking this trigger over. version 2:

Strangulation is always fun if done as a family. At least that’s what dad believed, mom hid, sis endured, and I’m cocking this trigger over.

]]> By: Stephanie SIlberstein http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/start-the-story-where-do-we-begin-12-16-09/comment-page-1/#comment-1716 Stephanie SIlberstein Wed, 16 Dec 2009 19:13:55 +0000 http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/?p=2555#comment-1716 Julie stared down at her brother's hands, then up at his strange, distant smile. She closed her eyes just in case. Julie stared down at her brother’s hands, then up at his strange, distant smile. She closed her eyes just in case.

]]> By: uberVU - social comments http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/start-the-story-where-do-we-begin-12-16-09/comment-page-1/#comment-1713 uberVU - social comments Wed, 16 Dec 2009 18:24:39 +0000 http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/?p=2555#comment-1713 <strong>Social comments and analytics for this post...</strong> This post was mentioned on Twitter by abhri: RT @fuelyourwriting: [NEW POST!] Bring on your best 1-2 sentences to start THIS story! http://bit.ly/5EaHJH... Social comments and analytics for this post…

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]]> By: Jamie http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/start-the-story-where-do-we-begin-12-16-09/comment-page-1/#comment-1711 Jamie Wed, 16 Dec 2009 14:44:39 +0000 http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/?p=2555#comment-1711 Their father stood by proudly, oblivious that his daughter intended to come after him next. Their father stood by proudly, oblivious that his daughter intended to come after him next.

]]> By: Jamie http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/start-the-story-where-do-we-begin-12-16-09/comment-page-1/#comment-1710 Jamie Wed, 16 Dec 2009 14:32:35 +0000 http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/?p=2555#comment-1710 His classmates all called him a "mama's boy," but Junior will show them. His classmates all called him a “mama’s boy,” but Junior will show them.

]]> By: Shane http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/start-the-story-where-do-we-begin-12-16-09/comment-page-1/#comment-1709 Shane Wed, 16 Dec 2009 14:21:39 +0000 http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/?p=2555#comment-1709 Strangulation is always fun if done as a family. At least that's what dad believed, mom hid, and sis endured. Can't think of a more twisted beginning to match this twisted picture than this. Strangulation is always fun if done as a family. At least that’s what dad believed, mom hid, and sis endured.

Can’t think of a more twisted beginning to match this twisted picture than this.

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