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		<title>By: David A. Kennedy</title>
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		<dc:creator>David A. Kennedy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Mar 2010 14:12:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Eric, you bring up a great point. Much of this advice translates to anything creative, not just writing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Eric, you bring up a great point. Much of this advice translates to anything creative, not just writing.</p>
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		<title>By: Eric</title>
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		<dc:creator>Eric</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Mar 2010 15:28:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great points.
I have to back away from my videos before I edit. I need time to digest the material, to step away from it, even when I have a plan, and come at the editing with fresh eyes. This definitely helps keep the enjoyment alive, gives me some much needed time off, and has proven time and again to produce a superior final edit.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great points.<br />
I have to back away from my videos before I edit. I need time to digest the material, to step away from it, even when I have a plan, and come at the editing with fresh eyes. This definitely helps keep the enjoyment alive, gives me some much needed time off, and has proven time and again to produce a superior final edit.</p>
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		<title>By: David A. Kennedy</title>
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		<dc:creator>David A. Kennedy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Feb 2010 21:19:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Shelley!

And give it a try. I bet it will stretch you in new ways and make your writing even better.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Shelley!</p>
<p>And give it a try. I bet it will stretch you in new ways and make your writing even better.</p>
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		<title>By: Shelley Gable</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shelley Gable</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Feb 2010 02:21:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is so spot on.  When I edit for others, I tend to cut and cut and cut.  When I edit for myself, I also try to focus on cutting. &#039;Cut what matters to you most&#039; - sounds painful...but I&#039;ll have to try it!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is so spot on.  When I edit for others, I tend to cut and cut and cut.  When I edit for myself, I also try to focus on cutting. &#8216;Cut what matters to you most&#8217; &#8211; sounds painful&#8230;but I&#8217;ll have to try it!</p>
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		<title>By: David A. Kennedy</title>
		<link>http://www.fuelyourwriting.com/the-first-step-to-being-a-better-writer/comment-page-1/#comment-840</link>
		<dc:creator>David A. Kennedy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Oct 2009 02:02:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s probably why it works! :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s probably why it works! :)</p>
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		<title>By: Elena</title>
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		<dc:creator>Elena</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Oct 2009 01:56:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Haha nothing like self-bribery!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Haha nothing like self-bribery!</p>
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		<title>By: David A. Kennedy</title>
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		<dc:creator>David A. Kennedy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Oct 2009 01:41:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love this thought. I think that author is onto something, and I might try it.

A journalism professor of mine did something similar with passive verbs. We had to put the number of times we used is, are, was, were at the top of the page. It made you write cleaner, shorter and crisper articles... I always tried not to go over four.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love this thought. I think that author is onto something, and I might try it.</p>
<p>A journalism professor of mine did something similar with passive verbs. We had to put the number of times we used is, are, was, were at the top of the page. It made you write cleaner, shorter and crisper articles&#8230; I always tried not to go over four.</p>
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		<title>By: Crows</title>
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		<dc:creator>Crows</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 18:51:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent article.  This kind of advice has helped me most in my writing; I am constantly reinforcing it in my brain and reflecting on my own material as I critique other pieces, saying &#039;take this out, this out, this out&#039;.

When I was just a little girl in primary school, an author of children&#039;s books came to our class and talked about how she wrote.  I don&#039;t remember who she was or what she wrote, other than picture books, but she said after she writes the story, she pays herself some quantity of money (a dollar?  A quarter?  I don&#039;t remember) for every word she removed, and after she was &#039;done&#039; with the story she took herself out to dinner with the money.  I&#039;ve never ACTUALLY done this, but I like the anecdote, and it makes me pay attention to how many words I cut out of something (I seriously compare word-counts).  That makes my antsy, childish sub-conscious feel more positive about deleting things I worked hard on if I feel less like I&#039;m losing stuff and more like I&#039;m accumulating.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent article.  This kind of advice has helped me most in my writing; I am constantly reinforcing it in my brain and reflecting on my own material as I critique other pieces, saying &#8216;take this out, this out, this out&#8217;.</p>
<p>When I was just a little girl in primary school, an author of children&#8217;s books came to our class and talked about how she wrote.  I don&#8217;t remember who she was or what she wrote, other than picture books, but she said after she writes the story, she pays herself some quantity of money (a dollar?  A quarter?  I don&#8217;t remember) for every word she removed, and after she was &#8216;done&#8217; with the story she took herself out to dinner with the money.  I&#8217;ve never ACTUALLY done this, but I like the anecdote, and it makes me pay attention to how many words I cut out of something (I seriously compare word-counts).  That makes my antsy, childish sub-conscious feel more positive about deleting things I worked hard on if I feel less like I&#8217;m losing stuff and more like I&#8217;m accumulating.</p>
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		<title>By: David A. Kennedy</title>
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		<dc:creator>David A. Kennedy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Sep 2009 15:44:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Christopher. Thanks for reading. And yes, this advice is hard to consider and/or follow, but if it&#039;s followed, you writing improves greatly.

I have a hard time following too, but I try my best to be ruthless with it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Christopher. Thanks for reading. And yes, this advice is hard to consider and/or follow, but if it&#8217;s followed, you writing improves greatly.</p>
<p>I have a hard time following too, but I try my best to be ruthless with it.</p>
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		<title>By: ChristopherR2D2</title>
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		<dc:creator>ChristopherR2D2</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Sep 2009 08:53:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice post, David. I, too, have a hard time considering it, but I&#039;ve heard this particular advice before so I&#039;m going to have to take a leap of faith and believe it works!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice post, David. I, too, have a hard time considering it, but I&#8217;ve heard this particular advice before so I&#8217;m going to have to take a leap of faith and believe it works!</p>
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		<title>By: David A. Kennedy</title>
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		<dc:creator>David A. Kennedy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Sep 2009 02:36:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s a good point, Chris. And one I make in the post. That&#039;s why it&#039;s important to work ahead a bit, so you have the time and space to get away from your writing for awhile. That way, when you come back to it, it&#039;s with fresh eyes and a new vigor.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s a good point, Chris. And one I make in the post. That&#8217;s why it&#8217;s important to work ahead a bit, so you have the time and space to get away from your writing for awhile. That way, when you come back to it, it&#8217;s with fresh eyes and a new vigor.</p>
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		<title>By: Chris</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Sep 2009 14:11:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I found that when I set my work aside for a longer period of time (&gt;1 week), I can edit much better.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I found that when I set my work aside for a longer period of time (&gt;1 week), I can edit much better.</p>
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		<title>By: David A. Kennedy</title>
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		<dc:creator>David A. Kennedy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Sep 2009 13:41:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for reading, Giselle! And try it. It just might help you out. ;)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for reading, Giselle! And try it. It just might help you out. ;)</p>
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		<title>By: Elena</title>
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		<dc:creator>Elena</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Sep 2009 11:48:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I agree with Tim about reading your work aloud. Sometimes we get so caught up writing a beautiful sentence that we don&#039;t realise that it could be said just as effectively in half as many words (or not at all!).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I agree with Tim about reading your work aloud. Sometimes we get so caught up writing a beautiful sentence that we don&#8217;t realise that it could be said just as effectively in half as many words (or not at all!).</p>
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